- Has strong adjectives
- Different sentence beginnings
- Different sentence lengths
- A simile and/or alliteration
- Has an introduction, body and conclusion
- Thoughtful word choices
- Your own goal:
Wow as I turned around I sore a beautiful island. The island was so beautiful because the sun was setting I could not believe my eyes when I heard the water splashing and the wind whooshing past my ear and all of the birds chirping and singing it was like a romantic move on the beautiful beach.Then this beautiful thing hit my eyes. There was a gorgeous tree standing right next to me. It was so beautiful I did not want to leave this place but I had to and then the next year I was so excited because I went there again I lived happily ever after.